बेवकूफी हम करते हैं और बदनाम प्यार होता है , कुछ लोग इन्ही तरीके के कारणों से खुदकुशी कर लेते हैं जिस चीज को मैंने बहुत करीब से महसूस किया है क्योंकि हमारे बीच का ही कोई इस दौर से करीब एक पहले गुज़रा था ,ये कविता का जन्म ऐसी ही कुछ घटनाओं का परिणाम मात्र है ।

जब बच्चा स्कुली जिंदगी से निकलता है और उसे किसी के प्रति आकर्षण या प्यार होता है ,तो किस तरह  से स्थिति बदलती होगी की बच्चा ये सब करने पे मजबूर होता है ये कविता उसी चीज का विश्लेषण करने की कोसिस करेगी और अंत में कवि ने अपनी राय भी रखी है ।                              

                             मेरा आह्वान 

                                      चरण  १ 

वो पुष्पों सी नाज़ुक ,

वो शबनम सी सुन्दर ।
वो उतरी इस धरा पे ,
देवी का रूप धरकर  ।।
                         पहली नज़र जब मई तुझे देख पाया ,
                         खुद को ख्यालों में डूबा सा पाया।
                         तेरे ही ख्यालों में मैंने गोता लगाया ,
                         कसम ये खुदा की मै बहार ही आ न पाया।।
 तेरे जुल्फों क पीछे से मुखड़े का दिखना ,
लगता है चंदा क पीछे यूँ बादलों का छुपना  ।
कुछ छोटी सी बातों पे तेरा रूठ जाना।,
लगता है चंदा पे कजरी का छाना ।.।
                                           शाखों ने तस्वीर बनाई आँखों में ,
                                           सुंदरकोई चीज तो तू ही दखती है ।
                                           मेरी नज़रों पे तू कुछ यूं छाई सी रहती है ,
                                           कहानी कुछ कुमुदिनी पे भ्रमर के मचलने सी लगती है ।

                                            चरण २                                                  

सब बंधनों को तोड़ कर ,
अब रुख हवा का मोड़ कर।
चलहम बसें दुनिया के एक छोर पर ,
सपनों का एक घर जोड़कर  ।.।
                                          संभव नहीं हम दो ग्रहों का मेल ,
                                          नहीं है कोई ये मामूली सा खेल ।
                                          छोड़  दे  ये  आस  अब   ।
                                           नहीं है तुझ पे भी विश्वास अब  ।.।
दर्दका ये प्याला न पिया जा रहा ,
अब कोई भी हल इस्पे न भा रहा ।
अब इस धरा क को त्याग दूंगा ,
इस जां को तुझ पर वार दूंगा। ।.।

                                                चरण ३ (कवि की राय )                                          

                                         इश्क़ की इस राह में ,एक सुंदरी की चाह में,
                                         दर-दर भटकता तू फिरा ,दुनिया की नज़रों मे गिरा ।
                                          तू समझ बैठा राधा को मिल गया है कृष्णा ,
                                          पर  ठहरी  वो   तेरी   मृगतृष्णा   ।. ।
आँखों की पट्टी खोलकर ,
दुनिया को ढंग से देखकर,
दे दे चुनौती वहीं डंके की चोटपर ,
मै वापस जर्रोर ही आऊंगा ,
प्रियतम तुझको मई ही लेकर जाऊंगा। 
स्थापित हर गलत विचार को विस्थापित कर के ही जाऊँगा। ।।
                                                                      कमजोरी मत साबित करना ,
                                                                      नज़ीर ही गलत मत स्थापित करना ।
                                                                      आह्वान करता हूँ तुम्ही से विराम देता हूँ यहीं पे  ।.।

एक बंधे समां को छोड़ आज ,
नया समां बाँधने  हम चले ,
ये भूल है दुनिया वालों की
की समां बांधना   मुस्किल है  ।
हम मतवाले और मस्ताने जहाँ कहीं भी होते हैं
सच बोलूं तो सही यही है बस दरकार  हमारी होती है ,
और समां वहीँ बन जाता है।
हर क्लेश वहां से मिटता  है ,
दीप  ख़ुशी का वहीँ देदीप्यमान हो जाता है। .
एक  नया जोश , और नया जूनून ,
एक नयी उमंग और नया रंग ,
लोगों में फिर से सजती है ,
हर मृतक भी फिर से जगता है ,
मुरझे फूल दोबारा खिलते हैं ,
ये बस्ती फिर से हंसती है ,
हम मतवाले और मस्ताने जहाँ कहीं भी होते हैं ,
बस समां वहीँ बांध जाता है।

ये कविता एक लड़के के प्यार के प्राइमरी स्टेज को शब्दों में पिरोने की कोशिश है दोस्तों ये उसी समय की मन की कश्मकश है जब लड़का ये निर्धारित करने में असमर्थ है की वो प्यार से गुजर रहा है या आकर्षण से…
पता नहीं ये प्यार है या आकर्षण है ,
पर हे इस धरा के ईश मेरे अवनीश अब जो मैं  नही चाहता वो कुछ और नहीं बस  प्रतिकर्षण है ,
जीत लूँगा इस ह्रदय को अब इसी मै आश में ,
चल पड़ा है ये पथिक भी अब इसी विश्वास में ,
पहली बार इस कवि के जीवन में शब्दों  का अभाव है ,
शब्द नहीं बरस पा रहे क्योंकि मेरे ऊपर तेरे जुल्फों की छांव है ।

Our government and media on ceasefire violation

Sixteen times ceasefire has been violated in the last sixteen days. Taking the last 4 days into account we find on oct 1 there were violation of ceasefire three times in sabjian and mandi sub sector in poonch and one forward area in Kashmir valley .
On oct 2 when india was celebrating the birth anniversary of MK gandhi the symbol of pease and the swachh bharat abhiyan was on progress then on that day 17 year old Zahira was killed and four of our innocent citizens were injured at gigriyal border .what we will do to that cleanliness when we are unable to guarantee full security to our citizens .
On oct 3 when this occurred 6 were injured from bombing of the mortar shells and the conditition of one of the women  is critical now who is in the hospital now .six of the hoses are badly damaged and five live bombs are recoverd in Uripora belt. Again on October 4 ceasefire violation taken place after Shelling border hamlet along LOC in poonch Pakistan troops resorted to heavy firing of mortar bomb.
Till now about 3000 people are evacuated and have to leave their home. Our Defence minister is after longtime saying that the army has managed all this very effectively, what we can conclude from his statements is it not just a Sarcasm that Pakistan is violating the ceasefire without any rhyme and reason and the rate of doing so is escalating.
Yes, Kashmir is our and we all are shouting for that but we are unable to care for that. On 2 October when all political leader were with a broom for cleaning India on MK Gandhi's (Symbol of peace) on that day. One young girl is being killed and 4 are injured. Media has covered the news with photograph of actor to gangster that they are cleaning India as headline & the ceasefire violation of Oct 2 as a ticker in one of pages. 
The news of Deepika Padukone's cleavage got viral on all social networking site but this has not.
If we say Haryana & Maharashtra's election campaign had sucked all the news then this will not be right but the more appropriate will be it was sucked the Media's mind.
 What a schizophrenic behaviour our government has adopted regarding this During the Lok sabha election addressing  an election campaign our honourable PM Narendra Modi was speaking from Amritsar border then media was covering that in 24x7 the speech of our former PM the speech of the current PM from Lalkila was not important for our media anyway in the speech was speaking that my voice should reach to Pakistan because Pak has to be alert. Then we the countrymen were hoping for a strong leadership and provided him majority. But what can we say now when he is unable  to guarantee security for them, our innocent citizen living in village near the border sitting in their home don't know that now a bomb may fall into our house. The point that is to be mentioned is in this time the is doing Haryana &Maharashtra election campaign to spread again his magic and encash his publicity and he also forgotten about the state whose 
people trusted him for change and given 3 out of 6 seats to his party and they all are betryaed again by the government .
If actor ,acterress ,cricketer himself or his relative suffers from fever is a breaking news but this is not .This is clear that the weep of weak and poors or the kashmiri's who are almost marginalised are neglected  and when the weep of poor is neglected but if  this weep will not be stopped by us then we should be ready for a big explosion by them .
First of all we should rule on our heart of kashmiries then on kashmir ,If this is not done so then It can also be said that kashmir will no longer will be ours as we are giving a chance to the seperatists and many more other such communities .

Why " Half Girlfriend"

As Riya was friend of Madhav and she was a girl too so she was his girlfriend .As mentioned in the novel :
         (1) she plays basketball a lot with him .
         (2) she use to spend her most of the time except the time of class with him.
         (3) she had invited only him from the college boys to her party at home .
         (4) she had avoided his misbehavior of trying to kiss and making non-healthy physical touch .
Inspite of doing all this she has to admitt that she was her half girlfriend only because to become a full one she has to make physical relation with him and Madhav wanted the same .so no Indian girl will want to be a full girlfriend of any boy because to be the full girlfriend she has to make physical relation that is not in the culture of India .
Actually she was not the half or quarter girlfriend but the thinking of Madhav was so cheap and the author had seem to be supporting that point of Madhav because he to was having the same thinking as that of Madhav but he succeded in conducting the test of half and full his college days but Madhav didn't .
What a rubbish thinking is getting reflected through this if someone agrees with these then if he is unable to change his own thinking then he must should also not say it to the mass when he is having such an image that the youth ready to follow him .
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A QUICK JOURNEY TO THE HALF GIRlFRIEND

The novel begins with the dramatic conversation of a young Bihari boy Madhav who was owner of Bihari thoughts and Bihari english too but later improved his english and the novelist chetan Bhagat who himself jumped into the beginning of story as one of the character .

Madhav was disappointed alot after loosing his gorgeous high profiled girlfriend of delhi origin from which he was  having the relationship from the st. stephens college of delhi and to whom he thought to be  dead till now as she had said in her last letter to Madhav that she was suffering from lung cancer .Riya was from a very rich family and left the college in her second year at age of 19  for her marrige with a rich boy Rohan . In that more than a year of duration In the college Madhav fell in love with her .

When Madhav met Bhagat in the hotel at patna ,he handed the all the journals written by her to him  inspite of that Bhagat was refusing to take that and  Madhav was  doing so  to get rid of from her sweet but painfull  memories .Madahav narrated the whole story to Chetan and Chetan suggested him smartly and gently as Krishna to pandavas in Mahabharata and ultimately drawned the conclusion that she may be alive after making madhav to read the journals again and listening to him .

This was as the intermission to the novel  and Madhav leaved chetan with a promise that he will find her and he will never quit from finding him as to quit is not in his gene .

The journey of Madhav for finding riya is heart touching and emotional too and reminded to that of majnu by laila in hindi literature .

Finally he found her in New york's  small bar as  it was her dream that she had told to Madhav  in the college days that  she want a life of that type . After a mind shaking effort and they settled to patna and they ran a school which got grant by foundation of Bill Gates and have high fame .Earlier the school was ran by Madhav;s mother .

The time span when there is description in the novel that how he met first with riya in the college's basketball court , how he managed his criss cross biharian english  with butter like fluent english of a high class delhi girl and how much difficult it was to pass the time in the party at Riya 's home where he was feeling he was  below the standerd in the people of there found to be the interesting ones .

The sarcasm ,comments and dialogues by the novelist were fabulous and enjoying alot  e.g.madhav said to himself "  Rohan gets Riya and Madhav gets biscuits" .

ये कविता हमारे उन भाईयो एवं बहनो  को समर्पित है जिनके प्यार में समाज की जातीय  व्यवस्था समस्या बनी  हुई है , वो कितनी  घुटन महसूस करते हैं इन बंधनो में जकड़े रहकर और क्या चाहते हैं ये कविता उन सभी  पिरोने की कोशिश है   , वो बंधन जिन्हें हमारे समाज ने  बनाया है और अपने ही लोगों का  सुख छीन लिया है ।

ख्यालों से तेरे मैं  अब कभी न दूर हो पता  ,

न तेरे पास जा सकता ,

न तुझसे दूर हो पाता । 

                                            ज़माने के बंधनो ने मुझे अब बांध रखा है , 

                                            न जाने क्यों ज़माने ने इन्हे अब तक सजोया है  ।   

                                            कसम मै   तेरी खता  हूँ इन्हे अब तोड़ दूंगा मैं , 

                                            रिवाजों के नए अब से सृजन तो कर  ही दूंगा मैं ।

धरा ये छोड़ दूंगा मैं जो तू  अब न मिली मुझको ,

जमाना छोड़ दूंगा मै  जो फिर ये हँस पड़े मुझ पर ।  

इन कुरीतियों को बनाने वालों धरा के मूर्खों  सुन लो ,

हमारे नौजवानों की जो तुमने आह लूटी है ,

ईश्वर के पास आकर वो अपना बदला निकालेंगे ।

                                             समर्थन तो ईश्वर  का भी  हासिल हमें होगा ,

                                              क्योकि ,

                                             मोहब्बत की इस प्रथा की नींव मेरे कान्हा ने रखी थी ।

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प्रहार सिर्फ गर्म लोहे पर ही किया जाता है ,
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